critique
the front
door is open–
i welcome
critique from other
poets
(60 Characters incl spaces)
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@JustinLambPoet's micropoetry
I write poetry and live in Snohomish, WA.
4.22.17
finishing
chores
quickly
so i can
take a nap
(44 Characters incl spaces)
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headlights
headlights
coming at me fast
still
i can’t seem
to move
(55 characters incl. spaces)
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tanka escaping
tanka escaping
like wisps of
smoke —
easy come
easy go
(56 characters incl. spaces)
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watching
watching
them practice
in the rain,
my boy’s
football team
(70 characters incl. spaces)
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with
with
pouring
rain,
fixing my old man’s
truck
(44 characters incl. spaces)
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Friday night
Friday night
Seattle-perfect gray
And wet
Being with you at home
Sounds perfect to me
(85 characters incl. spaces)
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lying awake
lying awake
before the alarm
calls,
steady rainfall
on the roof
(63 characters incl. spaces)
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footsteps
footsteps
back and forth before
the mirror
she works at finding
the best outfit
(79 characters incl. spaces)
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Self Hate
No need to hate yourself
For the struggles
That you face
But I know it’s hard
Not to sometimes
(94 characters incl. spaces)
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